Playground Sentences

We are practising writing complex sentences after reading interesting sentences written by Gavin Bishop. Our sentences were about something in a playground. Many have interrupters in the middle, to add extra information.

•  The terrifying merry go round, teleports you to horror land, making the kids scream and shout.  Ollie
•  The sparkling sea saw shimmered in the distance as it zoomed up and down. Cooper
• The ferociously fast spinner, making me nearly fall off, accelerated to become a blur. Sophie
• The rusty old swing, making me feel weird, goes so high I scream.  Emma
• The squeaky swing zoomed through the sub zero wind, nearly hitting the enormous tree. Hao Ren
• The speedy spinner rustled through the wind, as it nearly blew me over. Tayla
• The terrifying merry go round went as fast as lightning and the children were so dizzy that they bumped into a pole.  Zoe K
• The terrifyingly dangerous swing is impossible to stay on as you fall off and face plant.  Ajay
• The terrifyingly slippery swing, like a wet stone, made me fall off.  Ciara
• The zooming flying fox sped over the dirt road, landing finally with a bump.  Lucy
• The fun slide, squeaking from the rain, has long ropes.  Bao Tram
• The bouncy octopus made me sore, spinning around fast.  Zak
• The raging fast river sped past me as leaves and branches fell into the water. Mia