Persuasive Writing

Who Has The Toughest Job Santa Claus or the Tooth Fairy by Alizae Byers

I think Santa Claus has a tougher job than the tooth fairy because he has to squeeze down the chimney.

Santa Claus has one busy night of the year he has to travel around the world to drop off presents.  After Santa Claus puts the presents under the Christmas tree he has to eat and drink all of the supper.  I think he would be feeling full.

I think dogs are the best by Hao Ren

I think dogs are the best because they don’t scratch you and cats do.

Dogs are the best because they are not lazy and cats are really lazy.

They play with you and cats don’t because they just go to people’s houses and poo in their garden just like my one.

Dogs are good because they are really cute and they give you cuddles.

You can get more exercise because you have to give him exercise as well.

When you are sad, dogs will make you happy and cats don’t. 

More Mufti Days

I think we should have more mufti days. We should have more mufti

days so we can raise money for the school. If we raise money we can

buy more books and PE gear. We should have mufti days because other

schools get mufti days. If it can work for them it can work for us. Also it

is not fair that they get mufti days and not us. It can be a fun and

colourful aspect. It you’re having a fun day you can learn better. This is

why I think we should get mufti days: to raise money, other schools get

them and it is fun and colourful. Please can we have more mufti days

By Zoe B

We should have more Mufti Days

Every day on Friday please Mrs Gulbransen can we have more mufti

days?

Through the year there are lots of special days that we should be

celebrating. Last month we missed out on Orange Day, just to mention

one of them.

It is a great way to fundraise. Everyone that wants to dress up has to

bring money. Cancer kids are all over the world and we aren’t helping

them!

Lots of schools have mufti days every Friday and every day. Appleby

School has mufti day every day. Tasman Bay Christian School has mufti

day every Friday.

Once a year of mufti days is boring so please let us have more days of

mufti?

By Victoria

We should have more mufti days

We have had no mufti days at Nayland Primary, so I think we should have a mufti day.

I think we should have a mufti day because we haven’t had a mufti day this year. Lots of other schools have mufti days so I think we should have one too. My friend goes to a different school and they wear mufti every day, so it’s not fair for us. Another point is that it is more colourful and people sometimes like choosing their own clothes to wear to school. That’s good because if we are feeling happy we are better at our school work. If we have more mufti days we will have more things for our school from the fundraising. People will do school work much better because they will be feeling happy and it will be fair for us too because we will be wearing mufti sometimes.

We should have more mufti days because we will be more colourful, happier and it will be fair.

by Lucy

WE SHOULD HAVE MUFTI MORE DAYS

I think we should have more Mufti days.  My first reason is because other schools have it.  Some schools have it each Friday. We should have it because it won’t be fair for us it other schools have it.

Mufti is colourful and we will look like a rainbow.  It will make us feel happy inside.

We should have a mufti day because we have not had one this year.  If we don’t have one this year it will make us feel sad.

By Tayla Bromley