Princess and the Pea Narratives

The Princess and the Ball of Green Gum                                     By Ciara McLellan  

Once upon a time a lonely Prince had wanted a Princess for ages, but it had to be a real Princess. One day the Prince set off to find the perfect Princess to marry. But everywhere he looked he couldn’t find one. That night it was bad weather with pouring rain and thunder and lightning. Then there was a noisy ‘knock! Knock!’ on the door. “Please come, I need shelter” said the voice. Hurrying to the door, the King was hot “come here son” said the King, still running. When he finally reached the door the King saw that when he opened the door he saw a beautiful Princess standing at the door. “Come my dear. Lady, come!”

“Why are you in England my dear lady?” asked the King. You have travelled far in this storm! “Yes, indeed” exclaimed the Princess tiredly. “Could I stay the night?” Just then the Queen came and saw the Princess, “what a shame you are soaked from the tips of your hair to the tips of your toes” exclaimed the Queen. “You must stay dear. Now, your bed”. Then the Queen got up and walked towards a spare and empty bedroom.

The Queen then got her servants to take all of the sheets and duvets off the bed and then the Queen put a tiny-winy pea underneath. After that, the Queen got her servants to put twenty fat mattresses on top of the pea and then another twenty duvets on top of the twenty mattresses. A ladder was then placed alongside them. At the top, the servants put a pillow for the Princess to put her head on so it was very comfortable for her. “I’m ready for you to come and go to bed”.

When the Princess was in bed, the Queen said to her son “that Princess is hopefully a true one dear”. “I hope so too” said Prince William. Queen Elizabeth knew that her son wasn’t sure about Princess Charlotte being a true Princess. King Oboron could see that too, so they hoped for good luck.

In the morning, the King and Queen went to wake up the Prince so they could go and see the Princess. “Wake up son” said the King and Queen together, we need to go and see the Princess Charlotte.” Do I go with you, mum and dad?” asked Prince William. “Yes of course, anyway it is you who wants a real Princess!” declared the Queen. Together the group of three set off to the Princesses’’ bedroom.

When they got to Princess Charlotte’s bedroom, the Princess looked terribly tired. “How was your night-time sleep my dear?” asked the Queen. “Ter-ri-ble!, cried the Princess with her hand over her eyes. “My poor, poor little dear. Come downstairs and lets have breakfast” said the Queen. “Yes, please” exclaimed Princess Charlotte wearily.

In the end, it isn’t very hard to guess. Prince William got married to the real Princess, and, as for the pea, it was on display in the royal museum. And everyone lived happily ever after.

The End (thanks for reading)

The Princess and the Gum Ball                      by Mia Harnetty

Once upon a time there was a loving but sad prince. The Prince searched and searched the whole world to find himself a real princess. One terrible, extremely stormy night there came a violent knock on the castle door. The King opened the door. “Help” cried the little voice, “Help”. It came again. “I’m a real princess!” came the little voice again. “Let her in” screamed the bossy Queen. So the King let the unknown girl in. “I’ll sort her bed” cried the maid. When the maid had made the Princesses bed and the Princess had got in the bed, “ohh, who put a gum ball on the astonishing ground?” squealed the Princess Charlotte. Queen Elizabeth ran in and shouted to Prince George to come. In the morning the King Charles, Queen Elizabeth and Prince George and Princess Charlotte sent invitations to every person they knew. On the 4^th of May the castle garden was beautiful because George and Charlotte were getting married. Don, don, don, don!!!! (Sound effects. Say quickly. Ed)

“George, will you take the Princess Charlotte to be your royal wife?” announced Harry the Announcer. “Yes” shouted the Prince George. So they got married.

The End.

(Ohh, and just saying, the gum ball was kept in the royal museum. The End – Mia J)

The Princess and the Bouncy Ball

by Ajay

Once upon a time there was a prince who was lonely. He went down the steps with a big thump, thump, thump!! He went all over the world is his big huge limo.  Finally he reached England.  He hopped out of his limo and knocked on a door. The voice inside said, “Hello, who is it?”  “It’s Prince Charm, who are you?” “I am Princess Bubble Gum.” “Come with me my dear,” said the prince. “I shall take you to my castle in my huge limo.” So the prince took the girl back to his castle.  “Mother, mother, quickly make the bed,” said the prince.  First I must put a little bouncy ball at the bottom then layer 20 mattresses on top,” said the queen. She climbed the ladder to her bed.  She slept very well.  In the morning the queen asked how she slept.  She replied, “Very amazing!!” She was not a real princess.  Then another stormy night there was a violent knock on the door.  The bossy queen said, “Let her in.” She had dark, dark hair and a tall body.  “She’s great,” said the prince. “Go make the bed,” he said to the queen.  Now the queen put a little bouncy ball on the bed then 20 quilts and a pillow for her head to rest on. “The bed is ready,” yelled the queen.  “Ow, something is digging in real bad. I can’t sleep in this.  It is too painful,” said the girl.  In the morning the queen said, “How did you sleep?” The girl said, “Awful.”  The prince said to the queen, “She is a real princess.” So now the prince found a real princess.  They got married and the bouncy ball went in the middle of the museum.  That is the story of the Princess and the Bouncy Ball.

The Princess and the Pea

by Hao Ren

One day there was a prince and he wanted to marry a real princess. So he travelled around the whole world to find a princess, but he didn’t find a real princess. So he went back home lonely. One day a there was horrible weather and there was lightning and storms and big heavy rain. There was a princess knocking on the castle door, the king and queen opened the door. The princess said, “I am a real princess, please let me in, because I have lost my way and I all soaked”. So the king and the queen opened the door and the queen said to the prince “you have to have your manners, okay. The prince said, “Yes” to the queen. When the queen said to the prince there was a girl outside the prince was shocked, you know that the girl was soaked, that the water dropped to her body, then it dropped to her feet and then to the ground. But the prince didn’t know if the girl was a real princess. Then the prince went to find his father “how would we find out if the girl is a real princess?”. The king said, “Ask your mother”. The prince went to find his mother and his mother said, “I have got an idea, I can put 12 mattresses and then put a little bit of pea”. So that night the princess couldn’t sleep. She rolled and rolled but she still couldn’t get to sleep. The next morning the queen said to the girl, “did you sleep well?” “No!!!” cried the girl. “I didn’t sleep well, there was something digging deep. It was so so so so hard that I didn’t get to close my eyes”. When they finished breakfast the queen told the prince that the girl felt the pea. The prince was shocked because only princesses can feel that thing. After that the prince and princess got married and their child’s name started with P. When their children get older their father will tell them that story. So the pea was at the museum if no one steels it.

The Princess and the Pea

by Lexi

Once upon a time there was a prince. One sunny day the king said to the prince “You must find yourself a wife because you can’t stay single for the rest of your life”. Then prince relied “Then I must say yes”. The prince searched all over the world looking for a real princess. The next day he meet princess Ciara, but she said when they were having dinner “everything is mine, including breakfast, morning tea, lunch, afternoon tea, tea and dessert! Mine, mine, mine”. The prince said, “I’m sure she’s not a real princess, she even sounds like a boy! An hour later he found Princess Elizabeth, but she rode the horse like a man would ride a horse. A minute later he returned home without a princess and he was sad. That night there was thunder, lightning and rain and there was a knock, knock, knock on the wooden door. “Who is it?” said the prince. “I don’t know said the king, so let’s find out. When the opened the door they saw a beautiful girl standing at the door. “Help” she said, “Can I please come inside because I’m a real princess. “I’m just going to organize her bed” said the queen. The queen put 20 mattresses on the bed, then 20 thin quilts on the top of the mattresses and then she put a big ladder at the foot side of the bed. The queen told the princess to dry herself then go to bed. “She said I can’t sleep in this bed because I will never get to sleep, it’s digging in deep” “Let’s see what it is dear” said the queen, “It’s a pea!”. The prince got married to the real princess!

The Princess and the Pea

by Ollie

Far faraway in a land called Oclobitris was a prince called Bobby and he wanted a pretty princess. So he sent out letters in the newspaper saying, “All the princesses come to the manor castle at three o’clock Friday 15^th May, if you are single. Friday had come but……when he opened the door he didn’t see what he expected, there wasn’t just 5 princesses, there were 30 of them. One said,“What are you doing here?” Prince Bobby said, “I need to get married!!”, but none of them were good enough. One stormy night there was a BOOM, BOOM, BOOM on the castle doors. The king opened the doors, but what a sight, he saw a princess. The king let her in and the queen organized her bed. She put 20 mattresses and at the bottom she put a pea. “Now we shall see if she is a real princess.” That night the princess didn’t sleep. The queen came in to see if she was okay. The princess said, “There is something at the bottom of the bed.” The queen said, “She is the real princess.” So the prince and the princess got married.

The Princess and the Pea

by Bao Tram

Once upon a time a prince wanted to marry one girl to be his wife.  One night there was a big rain and a big wind.  A princess went in a castle and she said, “I am the real princess, please let me in.”  The queen put one pea on the bed and put twenty mattresses up on top.  The princess lay on the bed all night.  She felt something under the bed.  The next morning people asked the princess “Did you have a good sleep?”  she said “All night I felt something under the bed.”  The queen said “You are the real princess.”  The princess and the prince got married and lived together all their life.

The Princess and the Pea

Alyssa G

The king said, “Son you have to find yourself a wife.”  So the prince went to a village to find some princesses.  There were big ones and small ones and ones with big noses too.  None were the right type for him so he went somewhere different.  He saw a castle.  He went knocking on the door.  It was just the king and queen.  The princess must have been on a walk.  The prince said “Oh I’m sorry I was just seeing who was there.”  So he went home sadly.  When he got home a big storm started.  He went to his room.  When he just got to his room someone came knocking on the door.  “Who is that?” said the queen.  “Help help.  I’m a princess.  Can you let me in please all I need is a place to stay.”  So the king opened the door.  The queen said “Come in my dear I’ll get your bed made.  I’ll put a pea at the bottom of the bed and I’ll pile some mattresses on top.  And I’ll pile those duvets high as they can be.  Come in and sleep well.  I’ll put the dryers on.”  So everyone went to sleep.  In the morning the princess went to the living room.  The queen said, “Did you sleep well my dear?”  “No I felt something digging down deep.” “So you are a real princess,”  “Yes of course,” said the princess.  So the prince got married to the princess.  And the pea got put on the top of the castle and that was the end of my fairy tale.

 The Princess and the Pea

 Tayla Bromley

One day there was a prince.  He wanted to get married to a princess.  He went around the world to find a princess but they weren’t his type.  But one night there was a princess knocking on the castle door loudly with pouring rain and thunder.  The king opened the castle door and welcomed the princess in.  The queen went and made the bed.  She put the 10 mattresses on then she put the duvet on.  After, she put a little bitty pea under the mattresses.  The princess went to bed and she couldn’t sleep.  She felt something digging in to her back.  In the morning the queen said ‘How did you sleep last night?” to the princess.  The princess said “I couldn’t sleep last night there was something digging into my back.  Now I’ve got big bruises on my back”.  The queen and the king and the prince they all said “She is a real Princess.”  Then they got married and had kids whose names started with P.  

Princess and the Pea

Once upon a time there was a Prince looking for a Princess. He looked all around the world but he couldn’t find one. Then one night it was a stormy night. There was a Princess knocking on the castle door. It was a real Princess and she was cold and wet. The pea was at the bottom of the bed. The king put 20 mattresses and ten duvets. The Princess didn’t sleep well. So the Princess got married to the Prince.

by Zahrlis

The Princess and the Pea

One upon a time there was a Prince and he was looking for a Princess to marry. He decided to hold a ball that very night. At the ball there were lots of Princesses but they weren’t the Prince’s type. The next day there was a storm from 1 o’clock in the morning to 5 o’clock in the afternoon. During the storm that afternoon a droopy girl came to the castle and ponded on the door. The Prince hurried to the castle door and opened it. The queen came with him. The girl looked like a Princess but the Prince could not be sure. The queen scurried to the bedroom where Princess Anna was going to sleep. She ripped the bedclothes off the bed. She was in a hurry because Princess Anna would be cold and the queen would have to make her bath after dinner. She put a little pea on the first mattress then put 20 other mattresses on top. After dinner the queen showed the Princess to her room. In the morning the queen asked the Princess anxiously how she slept. Anna said, “OK but there was a very painful lump in my bed!!” That was when the Prince knew that she was a real Princess. But not for long because she married the Prince.

by Ruth V

The Princess and the Pea

One day there were a Prince and he wanted to marry a Princess. Then he went off to find a real Princess to marry. So the King and Queen gave the Prince a goodbye. So the Prince went off to find a real Princess. He went around the world. He went back home said to the King and the Queen, “It was horrible.” One stormy night there was a knock on the door. It was a girl. She said, “I am a real Princess”. The Queen said, “We will put it to the test.” The Queen said “You can be our guest” so the Queen went to make her bed. She put 20 mattresses and 6 pillows and put a pea under the end of the mattresses. The Princess went to bed. Then she hopped into the bed. But she couldn’t sleep. In the morning the Queen said, “How are you?” The Princess said, “Not good. I couldn’t sleep. I am blue and have bruises. There was a rock.” The Queen said to the Prince,“She is a real Princess.” The Prince and the Princess put the pea in a safe in the museum. Then they got married and the children’s names started with P.

by Alizae

Once upon a time there was a prince and he wanted to find a princess to marry. He searched all around the world but couldn’t find any. So then he went back home sadly. A couple of nights after that there was a terrific scary storm. Then there was a knock on the castle door. There was a voice that said ‘I’m a real princess’. So they let her come in. She was dripping. The Queen said she was going to make her bed. First she pit an iddy biddy pea. Then she put 20 mattresses over top of it. Then the Queen put a ladder against it so the princess could get up. Then the princess came. The Queen had finished making the bed. The princess climbed the ladder and she lay down. She made a terrible sound. She was a real princess so the prince and princess got married and their children all started with p. The pea stayed in the royal museum.

By Brodie W

Once upon a time there was a tiny castle. In the castle there lived a king, queen and prince. The prince looked all over the world to find a princess and couldn’t. One day a knock knock knock came banging on the door. Guess what it was, it was a real princess! “We will find out about that by putting a tiny pea at the bottom of the bed” moaned the king, “then 20 mattresses and 10 duveys”. The ladder was 30 metres tall so the princess climbed and climbed. “Ohhh there’s something scratching and tickling in there”. The next morning the king said to the princess “How did you sleep?”. The princess said “I don’t’ know because there was something in there scratching and tickling”. So the princess got married to the prince because she was a real princess.

By Preston

Once upon a time there was a prince and princess. Once day the prince was going to get a princess but he couldn’t find one. He travelled to look for one but he never found one until now. A person said she was a princess. The king said “what’s your name?”. She said her name was princess Sophia. The prince thought in his mind that it sounded like a princesses name. But she was sitting the wrong way. She said “I will take you for a ride”. The prince said yes. Away they went. The prince said “I will go off now”. “Yes your majesty” the princess said. So the prince walked from there. He went to his mother’s castle. In eleven minutes a princess came smashing on the door. She looked horrible in the terrible rain. “Please let me in” the princess said. The prince said to the Queen “Can you see she is a real princess?”

By Tane

Well the prince went to find a real princess all over the world but he had no luck. So he went back to the castle feeling very sad that he could not find a real princess. One stormy night a real princess came knocking at the castle door wet and cold. She asked if she could stay “because I am a real princess” she said. The Queen made her bed and put a little pea at the bottom of the bed. The princess could not sleep at all. They thought she was a real princess so the princess and the prince got married.

By Lincoln

My alien has purple spots on his body. He lives in a spaceship.

By Addison

One Prince wanted to find a real Princess.  He travelled the world but there was no hope.  When it was a dark and stormy night there was a pounding on the castle door.  The king pulled with all his might, at the door there was a Princess.  The King called the Prince then the Prince scampered to the door and he said “What a glorious sight”.  At dinner the Prince said “I will go and sort the bed”.  So Prince layed 20 mattresses and 20 quilts on the bed.  He put a tiny pea at the bottom.  When the Prince showed her the room, the Princess climbed the ladder.  Once the Prince left the room the Princess started to feel something.  In the morning the Queen asked “How did you sleep?” “Not good at all” replied the princess.  She was a real Princess.  So the Prince and the Princess got married together.  The End.

By:  Lucas Guyton

One day the Prince wanted a real Princess so he travelled all over the world over bridges and up hills.  He lined up fake Princesses but they weren’t his type so he went back to the castle.  One stormy night a Princess came to the castle.  She knocked on the castle door with a rat a tat tat.  The King was the first to get to the door.  He said “Come in dear.” “I have lost my way and I don’t know where to go” said the Princess.  “Ok” replied the King.  The King got the Prince and the Queen went to sort out the Princesses bed.  One of the guards got her.  She lay there for hours trying to get to sleep.  The next morning the Queen asked her if she slept well.  “I didn’t, something was digging and I didn’t like it.  I’m blue on my body”.  So the Queen knew that she was a real Princess.  They got married and their children all began with P.  Their honeymoon was a new castle in England.  They were famous.  The pea was in the castle museum.  The End.

By:  Emma Bond

Once upon a time there was a Prince he was travelling the world for a real Princess.  There was lots of Princesses.  Some were not even Princesses.  There was so luck for the Prince.  So the Prince went home.  The Queen was sad for him but one night the King heard a knock on the door.  So did the Queen.  They opened the door and in the rain stood a Princess.  She said “I’m lost I’m a real Princess” then the Queen said “We’ll see about that.  Come In we’ll get you some new clothes.  I’ll make your bed.  The Queen told the servants to get a lot of mattresses and blankets.  Before putting on the blankets and matresses she put a little pea.  Then the Princess climbed the ladder to get to the top.  When the Queen said good night the Princess felt a hard thing in the bed.  She moaned and was trying not to wake anyone.  In the morning the Queen said “Did you sleep well?” “No I did not there was something in the bed.  I could not sleep at all because there was something in the bed” said the Princess.  “Yes she’s a real Princess” said the Queen.  “It’s a miracle we found a real Princess” said the Prince.  The real Princess got married to the Prince.  It was a good day for the Prince and Princess because after a week they had kids.  Their names started with P like Pella, Pretty and Palm

By Brianna

One prince was single and he was looking for a real princess.  He went all over the world to find a real princesss but the prince had no luck.  He was very sad that he could not find a princess.

The next night there was a terrible storm.  There was a knock knocking on the castle door. “Help!” said a voice. ‘I have lost my way.  Please let me in because I’m an authentic princess.” “Excuse me for a minute while I organise the bed,” said the Queen.  One mattress, another and another.  We still won’t stop.  On the bottom they put a little bitty pea.   The princess lay down and she felt something digging into her skin.  She said, I can’t stay here because I will never get to sleep.’ Finally the prince found himself a real princess.  The prince married her and all their children began with ‘P’.  At last the prince found himself a real princess. 

by Zoe B