Persuasive Writing

Dear Mr Wolf

Why would you have to eat those little pigs? I think that would be the biggest mistake of your life, their mother would be furious. Or maybe you could be a vegetarian that would make you sick.

Crunch! Do you like the sound of that? I don’t think you do. Maybe they could help you find better food. It’s much better than killing animals for nothing. You should just eat vegetables instead of animals. Think would you like it if someone eats you? I wouldn’t. Don’t eat them in one gulp you throat is not big enough. You could but it could feel like you broke your arm but in your mouth. So please listen to my opinion and please let those precious pigs live a happy, happy beautiful long amazing great life.

From The three little pigs good friend, Olivia

Dear Mr Wolf

Mr Wolf can you not eat us because it is our first time making a house. Mr Wolf can you just eat cows? We can be friends. We can help you to find cows because we taste like fish food and we smell like dog poo and we are hard to eat. What would happen if it was your family would you eat them?

Mr Wolf if you eat us our mother will be upset and then no one would want to be your friend and then you will have to eat vegetables every day.

From Room 9        by Felix

Dear Mr Wolf

Stomp, stomp Mr Wolf I don’t want you to eat the little pigs, or blow their houses down. They are nice and cosy. If you don’t they will be kind back and won’t hurt you.

Firstly, what did they ever do to you? They wouldn’t come over to you because you are too scary for them.

Secondly, what if you’re allergic? If you’re allergic you could get eczema and get really sick.

Next, bacon is not nutritious to eat you could die. I’m trying to help you survive. We would look after you when you are a granny.

Finally why do you want to eat them? They could feed you beef then you don’t have to eat them otherwise their lives will be ruined.

Oh please don’t eat my little darlings you can be friends with them because they are little angels.

Signed by little pigs mum

PS, Wait I have got more to talk to you about this is the little pigs mum, why would you want to eat my sweet hearts they are only little.

From The little pig's mum and the little pigs friends.    by Leannah

Dear Mr Wolf

Please why do you have to eat the three little pigs? I have three very good reasons why not to eat them.

Firstly if you eat the three little pigs you won’t have any friends. You could make friends with them instead.

Secondly pigs are hard to eat. Their bones are hard so you might choke on them and you don’t want that to happen.

Last of all if you eat too much meat you might get sick. Three pigs is a lot of meat and you need to have a balanced diet.

To sum up there are lots of reasons that you shouldn’t eat the three little pigs so please don’t!

From Isla

Dear Mr Wolf

Why do you need to eat the three little marvellous pigs?  I think you shouldn't as you might be allergic to bacon.  Even if you're not allergic please don't eat the three little pigs.  They can help you and find some food for you.  Even if they can't find food you could visit them and they can cook some food.  If you eat them their teeth will break your teeth.  If you did you would be very brazen.

You will get very sick if you eat them.  Your mother will be very angry at you and ashamed.  It's not very nice to eat little marvellous pigs.  Your mother will ground you. 

From Room 9.

By Lucah

The Three Little Pigs

"Fe fi fo fum, I smell the blood of three little pigs," said the wolf.  Wolf blew down the stick and straw house too.The two pigs ran as fast as a cheetah to the brick house before Mr Wolf gobbled them up.

by Arlyhm

Dear Mr Big Bad Wolf

"Why should you eat the precious pigs? When you can eat other animals." I don't think you should eat the pigs.

Mr Wolf you should not eat the pigs because they can help you find other food from the forest, like nuts and veges.

Mr Wolf you shouldn't eat the little pigs because you might choke on the bones and teeth.

Mr Wolf you shouldn't eat the three pigs because it's a bad diet and you might be allergic to bacon.

To sum up, I have given up my time to write you three very good reasons not to eat the pigs, so pretty please with a cherry on top, don't eat them.

Signed the Three Little Pig's Friend.

PS. If you're eating the pigs so you can have their home, find a den in the forest.

By Alexander

Dear Mr Wolf,

Can you not eat the three little pigs, you might get sick. I have great reasons for you. Why do you have to eat the pigs? If you eat them you might get sick, they have bones in it. When you blow their house down they were sad. Their mother sent them out to survive. They are precious and marvellous. If you did something to them, then what did they ever do to you? Their mother will be cross and very annoyed because of you. Please don’t eat them and get my advice.

From the little pigs and the mother.        (  by Zhuling )

Dear Mr Wolf,

You shouldn’t eat the little pigs because how would you feel if someone did that to you?

Firstly, you shouldn’t gobble up the precious pigs because their mum might be sad and upset. If someone did that to your children you would get very upset.

Secondly, if you eat the three tiny pigs you might get sick and die or you could be allergic to bacon. The bones and teeth could be shocking for you.

Thirdly, you won’t have any friends. You’ll be lonely. You’d be much happier if you didn’t eat the cute pink pigs.

Finally, it isn’t fair you are a big bully to the little pigs. You could be friends, please, please don’t eat the pigs.

From Lainee

Dear Mr Wolf.

I think you shouldn’t eat the three little pigs because the three little pigs might help you. You could help the three little pigs make their homes. You shouldn’t eat the three little pigs because the three little pigs might cook you some meat. You shouldn’t eat the three little pigs because your teeth might fall out.

From Gabrielle 

Dear Mr Wolf.

Please don’t eat the pigs you might get very sick. We will help you find some food. Keep going down the path there is a vegetable patch on the way. There are carrots growing at the vegetable patch. Would you like to taste these delicious carrots? Another reason is what if the pigs ate your family? I would hate that.

From Room 9  (by Hunter A )

Dear Mr Wolf

P-P-P-Please don’t eat my darling children, I want them to live a long life.

Firstly, you might choke and die and we don’t want that to happen to you, we’re doing it for your own health. Secondly, they need to grow grey and old like you and wrinkly.

Thirdly, you can’t just live on meat because you will get sick and die.

Fourthly you don’t want to get their germs.  Pigs have a lot of germs under their hooves.

I can always help you find other animals like rabbits, deer and sheep just not my children!  Listen to my advice don’t eat my children!

From their darling Mother.

By:  Josh Bond

Dear Mr Wolf

P-P-P-Please don’t eat the lonely precious pigs because I’m their only friend they ever had and why can’t you eat other wild animals from the deadly, deep, dark woods?  They need to grow to their wrinkly old age of 20.

Firstly, eat creatures your own size and you might be allergic to pork or bacon and not knowing.

Secondly, pork and bacon aren’t good nutrition and you might get sick and go to the animal hospital.

Mother pig might be so sad that she has a heart attack and dies so that means you get a life sentence to animal jail until you turn into bones so we don’t want that to happen, aye?

Hopefully this note gets to you and I convinced you to not eat the three little pigs.

I will be depressed and have no friends.

From the little friend, John.

By:  Riley Tootell