The Iron Man
By Ruth
There was a rustling in the tree tops as a great iron foot appeared in
front of my Dad’s car. I was petrified
because now there were two dazzling head lamps in the top of the trees.
Suddenly, a colossal iron hand reached out for the car. My Dad drove right into his foot and he came crashing down like a massive tree was falling. Now there was just a pile of cogs and metal.
We drove past the iron man and back to our cosy, safe home. When we got home, there was warm pumpkin soup
on the table.
By Ruby
It was a gloomy night and Hogarth smelt oil, as a hedgehog scuttled
away. Then, a giant iron foot stepped
out of the darkness. Hogarth froze with
fear, as the iron body came from the trees.
He ran as fast as a cheetah, all the way back to his Dad.
Hogarth’s dad called all the farmers he knew. They had a serious meeting.
“What is this iron creature?” one of the farmers asked.
That night, the wind was wild, and Hogarth was all cosy in bed. Hogarth felt horrified in the morning; he
thought he’d see that hideous creature again, and he did.
He screamed “AAAAAAAAAh! Please don’t eat me!”
The creature chuckled “I won’t eat you, you’re not metal!”
“Phew.” Hogarth whispered.
The Iron Man
By Bailee
Once, a mother was casually walking down a hill and said to herself,
“This is a beautiful place to have a picnic.”
So, she bought her sons and her husband with her and they all sat down
to have some food.
They heard a thump, then it stopped.
They thought it was an earthquake from China, but they heard it
again.
The boys screamed with horror.
Then, they saw two bulgy arms appear out of nowhere. They all saw an enormous head, then the body,
then the legs, and before you knew it, a whole metal giant appeared. The mother screeched with horror “Let’s go
home!”
They all agreed, so they all sprinted to the blue car and never went to
that green grassy hill again.
The Iron Man
By Matilda
Once on a lovely sunny spring day, a family were having a delicious
picnic on green, soft grass on a hill.
They felt a rumble. They heard
the birds tweet. Then they saw them fly
away in a big flock; as if they were a ginormous giant flying in a hefty plane.
All was quiet, then suddenly, a colossal noise came from the surface of
the ground. The ground shook again.
“It’s an earthquake in Japan!,” said the lovely Mum. The Dad explained how the impact of an earthquake can travel around the world.
But then, a huge crack covered the hill.
They were petrified! The red
chequered picnic mat slipped through the gigantic crack in the ground.
An oily iron hand crept up through the ground. All the divine food slipped into the
crack.
“Run!” cried the Dad! They all jumped in their bright blue car, and sped
away like mad!
The Getaway by Fiona McLellan
One day a family of four were having a picnic on a beautiful
hill, with perfect green grass for a picnic. An iron finger suddenly emerged
from under the hill. This was no ordinary finger though, for it belonged to a
great beast; the iron man. The family did not know this of course because they
did not believe in the iron man!
There was a crack and it was getting bigger by the minute.
And then the crack was so big it sucked the teapot and picnic mat up. The
tremendous hole had separated the girls and boy so the dad declared “run to the
car” and so they did.
The adults put the children on their shoulders and they fled
for their lives, and when they got to the car they opened the doors and got in.
When they got in the car they locked their doors and went, they didn’t even
bother to put on their seat-belts because they were horrified.
The Iron Man by
Hayley Paterson
Once there lived an Iron Man. Everyone was scared of him.
One day the Iron Man was stomping through the country’s farms and Hogard was in
the car with his dad. Then the next thing they saw was the Iron Man he was
right in front of them!
They were horrified and they tried to turn around but they
ran out of petrol. Hogard commanded his father to run so he sprinted like he
was in a marathon. Once his father was out of signed Hogard shouted in horror
“Iron giant please stop eating all of our iron stuff”. Se he did, in fact he
followed Hogard to the iron junk yard.
The Iron Man’s Pushing!
by Connor Edwards
Hogarth and his dad are shivering in terror when a
gargantuan iron foot and headlamp eyes shine in the distance. Then a huge iron
torso emerged from the trees. The ground was becoming shaky and they gazed at
the Iron Man's colossal body. They screamed in fright and the car bolted away
like Usain Bolt. When they got home they felt petrified, they had just run nose
to nose with the Iron Giant.
Iron Man by Bao
Tram
Once upon a time there was a giant of the world called the
Iron Man. One spooky night at the vegetable farm all the farmers were in their
comfy beds. There were quiet footsteps and silently there was a huge shadow.
The Iron Man tried to open the gate and suddenly there was a sound like books
falling off the shelf. Very loudly, all the farmers rushed outside, and the
giant disappeared very quickly. One of the farmers cried “oh no, where have the
tools gone? ”
The next day the farmers had a meeting to trap the Iron Man.
They made a trap so if tonight he came he would get caught in the trap. In the
dark night there were no loud noises. In the morning the trap that they set was
still there. In the afternoon it was getting darker and darker.
The next lovely morning the trap was still there so Hogarth
knew there was a problem. When it was getting darker and darker and when
everyone was falling into a dream, Hogarth sneaked outside quietly.
Iron Man by Connor M
On a peaceful day some people were having a lovely picnic on
the spot where the Iron Man was buried.
Then the Iron Man was waking up.
The people thought it was an earthquake happening but then cracks
started to appear in the ground and a colossal
hand emerged from the surface.
The itsy bitsy people fled to their car. They were horrified of the jumbo size hand
rushing out of the pit that was dug two months ago. “GET TO THE CAR” the boy was shouting out. They were miserable that the picnic was
over.
They thought the Iron Man was a nasty invention. The Iron Mans footsteps were as loud as a
gong!
Iron Man by Alizae
One lovely day there were some people on a hill. They were having a picnic on the hill but
suddenly they felt the ground shaking.
They thought it was an earthquake until they saw a jumbo crack in the
ground.
Soon the crack got even wider. The blanket fell in the crack. Suddenly a hand came out of the crack. No one knew what it was but people ran away
from the Iron Man.
Suddenly the hill broke into the pieces, then the Iron Man
was free from the hole that the farmers made in the ground. Off the Iron Man went into the town. Suddenly Hogarth and his family saw the Iron
Man
Iron Man By Brodie
When a family was having a picnic, the ground started to
shake. The mum thought it was just an
earthquake but they do not have earthquakes in that area.
All of a sudden some of the food was gone. A humungous iron hand came out of a widening crack. The family started to hustle and scream in
horror.
The Iron Man had awoken in fury. Green grass had got torn into smithering
bits. The family were still sprinting
away in horror and the boy was so so scared that he chucked his hat up in the air.
As the family go into the car, the Iron
Man had got out of the hole and onto his feet and stated to eat all the metal
he could find.
Then when Hogarth saw the Iron Man he exclaimed “Hey you,
hey you come here . I shall take you to
a place where you can eat all the metal you want. If you stop eating all our metal I promise”. So he
did and they lived happily ever after.
The Huge Iron Man by Darcy
At night when we were driving home, a huge Iron Man came to
pick us up as if he was trying to eat us.
We were so scared. I screamed in
my head, “What will happen to us?" I also
nearly got a heart attack.
“Dad, Dad, what are we going to do?”
The Iron Man took a gigantic step, he nearly hit out new
car. The Iron Man picked us up. I was
so frightened, what is he going to do to us?
He said “I’m a friendly giant I’m not going to eat you. Do you want me to take you home?" “Yes,” they said and lived happily ever
after.
The Iron Man By Bella
On a sunny day, a family was going to have a picnic. When they
were half way there a humungous foot stepped on to the road. The man that was in the car climbed out of
his car and he tried to find out what it was.
The man was fiercely walking into the forest. The ground was crushed as the footsteps came closer to their car. It felt like an earthquake rumbling. The little boy tried to stumble away from the humungous foot as he got too tired to get home without his dad.
The man was fiercely walking into the forest. The ground was crushed as the footsteps came closer to their car. It felt like an earthquake rumbling. The little boy tried to stumble away from the humungous foot as he got too tired to get home without his dad.
The little boy got a fright from the dark gloomy house that
he walked slowly into as the Iron man chased him.
The Iron Man by Sylvie
“DAD, DAD come see there are head lamps in this tree”! Hogarth’s Dad came tearing through the
trees. He was stunned at what he saw.
There were two blazing white eyes looking down at them and two gigantic feet
were in the middle of the road.
Suddenly an enormous
IRON MAN strolled out of the huge maple tree and a hedgehog scampered
away. Hogarth managed to shout, “GET IN
THE CAR”! They fell into the car and never came back.
At home Hogarth was sooooo horrified that he face planted
into his bed. Oh what a nightmare he had
that night. It was soo wretched that in
his dream he woke up and saw out of the window a colossal IRON FACE looking at
him.
The hedgehog scuttled away,
because the Iron Man was coming…cluck…cluck.
Once a family went to have a picnic
on the hill that the Iron Man was trapped in. They did not know that the Iron
Man was trapped in there. When they stopped unpacking, the ground shook. They
thought it was an earthquake but it was not.
The Iron Man by Laela
On a nice spring day, out of
nowhere, an Ironman emerged from the ground. The crack ate their red checkered
blanket as the ground shook. While an Iron Man’s hand appeared out of the
ground, all the people could taste was dirt. All they could see was the Iron
Man’s hand. All they could feel was the ground shaking and all they could smell
was a jumbo oily iron hand. All they could hear was “eeee” as the iron fingers moved.
The
dad soon remembered that where they were sitting is where they buried the Iron
Man. The Mum and Dad, but not Hogarth, dashed like the wind because Hogarth
shouted, “If you leave us alone we will give you all the metal you want. Just
follow me. I will show you. There is lots I promise.”
Like
Hogarth said (follow me), so the Iron Man did follow and he never stopped
eating again. Everyone thought that was a splendid idea. Then they all had a party.
The Iron Man by Rory Shand
Hogarth’s
father looked up at an enormous huge head. It looked like it was bigger than
30,000 children’s heads. Hogarth’s father, scared as a squirrel, drove into an
enormous metal foot of the Iron Man. Once it was down, the metal giant was
tremendously furious. Hogarth heard a grating noise as they were driving away
speedily.
The Emerging Iron Hand by Zahrlis
On a rainy day an iron hand came
out of the ground and everyone jumped with fear. Everyone thought it was a
zombie emerging from the ground so they screamed while racing to their cars.
They drove away to their houses and locked everything so the Iron Man couldn’t
get in. The ground started to shake but they thought it was an earthquake but
it was the Iron Man trying to break in.
The Tremendous Iron Hand by Lucas Guyton
The
boy saw an immense oily iron hand peering around. The boy gazed at the gigantic
iron hand. He screamed. The dad saw the yellow stripped picnic mat sucked into
the enormous hole, as was the smoked chicken, the apples and the salad.
As
the hand rose from the ground, the family screamed in terror. They bolted to
their burgundy car and drove away as fast as they could.
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